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I was thinking of reasons why Elijah is so pessimistic, and I was thinking maybe his father was murdered when he was little or something or his father just died ...

I fixed the missing quotation mark, but I think Elijah was just calling Peter, Pete like Peter calls him Eli.

I really liked reading this poem. The title was really fitting, and the whole thing was really flowing together like a miniature story. I found no issues with it except ...

I loved reading this. Really, I did. It was awesome! I didn't see any grammatical errors, and I didn't have any issues with it as I often do when reading ...

I like it. It sounds, or at least how I read it, angry. Anger is cool, or at least it is to me. Every night I think about all my ...

The next morning, after getting dressed and eating, Peter walked across the street to Elijah’s house. Elijah’s mom had agreed to drive them to Atlanta when Peter’s parents had to ...

Kara Hargreaves covered all of the issues in the story, so no need to point anything out. Overall, I really like the whole plot of the story like I mentioned ...

I liked it, and I definitely would like to read more when you get it written. It was well-written, and I really liked the whole plot. I did have to ...

Okay! I like your suggestions. I mentioned to you how I modeled Peter after Jesse from class. I hate to tell you, but mostly every guy in my school hugs ...

Hey Ashley! I haven't seen you since you got off the bus yesterday! What have you been up to? Anyway, I liked your poem! I didn't know you wrote poetry! ...

The high school band director came to talk to us about high school band, and it turns out, we don't get a choice of what we do. If we are ...

First of all, I love the little girl's name. Uncommon names like that draw my attention. As far as grammar and stuff like that, I didn't see any mistakes, so ...

Never did Elijah think that losing a friend would save his life, and now, after surviving two months of frozen hell, he knows, without any doubt whatsoever, that anything is ...

I'm trying to write a story that takes place on Nanga Parbat. I've been doing a bit of research on it myself, but if anyone has any information on it, ...

Hi! So, is it safe to say you are a Harry Potter fan? Have you written anything other than the novel you're working on? Who're your favorite authors? (I feel ...