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I like this idea. It would be neat to get a background story on it. :} There were a few grammar/punctuation errors. I suggest you just read through it and ...

Thank you, very much! I'll make changes. And the spacing for dialogue is meant to be that way, but I can change it if necessary. Haha, I'm not entirely sure ...

I would imagine him to be humble and modest, and a strong leader. Pierkin (male)

"But aren't simple fools always easily entertained?" -Leo

Well, I have a lot of suggestions, so i'll only give you a few. First off, I can connect with this piece, considering my favorite character of all time is ...

Very interesting story. Rather macabre, but i think that's what you were going for? Anyway. First off, put larger breaks in between paragraphs/dialogue. It is easier to read and follow ...

This is a very intriguing piece. I liked it a lot. Cliffhangers always get ya'. :} I, personally, liked all of the "back and forths." I think they add a ...

[Rough draft. To be edited continuously with given critique. Hope you like it!] “Did you hear?” “About the prince?” “The prince! The little prince is coming!” The day of Announcement ...

I would like to write some sort of fantasy story. Or any story really. I just can't seem to do it alone. hm. Can I have help, please? :}

For me, it's gotta be The Merlin Effect. That was the first "long" novel I read, in the third grade, and I loved it. It was a library book when ...

The first story I can ever remember, I wrote in fifth grade. It was about a baby unicorn named Elador. Haha. I made a cover for it out of cardboard ...

I write because I like my characters. Because I can get into someone else's mind, when I get bored with my own.

Do you ever feel like you just can't stand a book/movie/game because there is at least one amazing character, and you are frustrated by how you can only know so ...

No, I don't even know what that is. Haha! Thanks again, Sam! I'm writing more and more chapters. Right now, just all of the important parts though. Hopefully very soon ...

First off, I really liked this piece. I like the vagueness it has, and that the only real specific details you give us are about the Magnolia tree. It's like ...