dualshock71

Okay, italics are weird today. Only did the first paragraph, not the whole section. So, any good?

Hear you now the history of Gaia, that world on which you and yours reside. Long, uncounted years past, there was no world, only the Great Black in which are ...

Well, you got me hooked. Definitely reading on. Couldn't spot any errors that hadn't already been pointed out.

Interesting. Kind of depressing for my tastes, but interesting none-the-less. Although I'm not much of an editor, I noticed one tiny mistake. Metres. I think you meant "meters". Still, it's ...

Wow....I feel welcome already. For the record, I'm more of a fantasy writer now, though I'm planning a dabble into sci-fi again. I'm going to do my best, at the ...

Hey, y'all. I'm Nathan, new member of the site. I've been writing since I was 6 (little sci-fi bits that made no sense to anyone but me), and I feel ...