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Re: Underwater
Sometime’s there’s no warning. Nothing at all. It seems as if nothing can go wrong. Everything is perfect. And then, just when you think life can’t get any better…when you ...
Sep 29, 2008 -
Re: Underwater
a thriller story i wrote. it isnt finished yet but id appreciate your comments. there are a few grammer mistakes but if you could find it in your heart to ...
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: The Decieved
(sumthing i just came up with) comment if ya like. His skin was burnt charcoal black. There were cracks of yellow and red in his flesh as if his very ...
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: Life = Pain
This is my monologue. its about a guy who lives on the streets and what his life is like. read it and tell me what you think. enjoy! I just ...
Feb 27, 2007 -
Re: Fire
(Here is a poem i just wrote about fire. read it and let me know what you think. enjoy!) FIRE Fire. It is not just the thing that keeps you ...
Feb 20, 2007 -
Re: The beast on the beach
(this is just a first draft so plz be nice when you reveiw it. enjoy!) plz write a comment! The last few people were walking off the beach. It was ...
Jan 16, 2007 -
Re: Nothing
I Think your piece is awesome!!! it really shows the typical fights that sisters get into. then afeter nikkie realises that crystal is actually covering her, she reacts differentlsy around ...
Jan 16, 2007 -
Re: Teenage life. part 3
I always knew her family didn’t like me but we’ve been together for a year now. I’d have thought that they’d have adjusted to the fact that Kalisha and I ...
Jan 6, 2007 -
Re: My Writing Piece part 2 (not poetry)
i dont know how to write in the non-poetry section! (sorry. im new here.) but please tell me tell me! what did you think of it as a story
Jan 6, 2007 -
Re: My Writing Piece part 2 (not poetry)
CHAPTER 2 The crowd is screaming. We’ve finished are last song. Darren takes the microphone and screams to an audience of 20 000 “Thank you so much New York!! You ...
Jan 6, 2007 -
Re: my writing piece.
whoops! sorry! i didnt know i did! that would explain it! ha! hey can send you the next chapter if you want? waddya say?
Jan 6, 2007 -
Re: my writing piece.
i wasnt writing poetry. i was writing a story. what do you think of it as a story?
Jan 6, 2007 -
Re: my writing piece.
I always knew her family didn’t like me but we’ve been together for a year now. I’d have thought that they’d have adjusted to the fact that Kalisha and I ...
Jan 6, 2007
