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  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Last of The Homo Sapiens Part 2

    The second part to the story about the last human in the evolved human world. The conclusion is in the process of being written. The beginning of the story is ...

    Aug 15, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Anthro Society: Prologue

    I would make the scene of the mother and father death longer. It seems way to sketchy for such tragic event. Also, the sentences and language here seem kind of ...

    Aug 8, 2007
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Last of The Homo Sapiens Part 1.

    This is my first foray into the short story. Please critique honestly, I need to know if I am to continue with this tale! The Last of Homo Sapiens He ...

    Aug 7, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Revelations

    Alright, I am not really used to the whole "constructive criticism" thing. This is kind of vague, that is for sure. But at the same time, the idea is excellent! ...

    Jul 27, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Chechnya and Song about Burned Flag

    Chechnya Rain falls down gently onto the weeping soil That was just under the burden of bombardment And shapes move out in the mountains Untold multitudes of struggling resistance The ...

    Jul 27, 2007


"And what is the use of a book," thought Alice, "without pictures or conversations?"
— Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland