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  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Empty Sky

    Hey, I stumbled across this and am glad I did. It’s pretty good, but here are my thoughts for improvement. Let me know if you want me to re-explain anything ...

    Oct 13, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Third Avenue

    Hmm... This does seem a little slow, and I think it’s because there’s a fair bit of repetition, both in the information you give your readers and your choice of ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Anyone want to be reviewed by a Banana?

    I haven't even been on it long and yep, it's a lot better. But then so is Storywrite and authonomy, and they're not without their flaws. This one looks like ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Anyone want to be reviewed by a Banana?

    I’m new to the site, but an old reviewer. if you've used another writing site before, maybe you know me? Well, it’s hard to know from all the stories out ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: New but Lost...

    Thanks guys. I'm a fantasy / dystopian with a hint of romance type of writer. Bit of thriller and sci-fi seem to be seeping through, but I enjoy reading anything ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: New but Lost...

    Hey, not really sure what to say. I've wanted to be a published author since I was 7. I’m hoping my latest attempt at a novel will be literary agent ...

    Oct 12, 2010


If you can't get out of your comfort zone, you'll never find what you're looking for. Don't make things quick and easy to feel better short term. Make a change and then you'll feel better longer term.
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