dreamybanana

I feel your poem has already taken a beating so I won’t say too much. I think you need to use the comments you already have as you seem to ...

Here’s a dreamy review as requested. I hope it helps. Humongous first paragraph! An opening paragraph is supposed to grab your reader’s attention to hook them in, but also to ...

Ok, this is the first time I'm posting something on this site. All comments welcome with open arms. Thx for reading. ---- Shadow Runner Prologue My mother died of ovarian ...

The thing is, usually teen poetry is one dimensional and centred on feeling we like to think are unique but are not, and anything better than that (which is where ...

Ah, I lost the internet for a few days, but now it's found. I'll see if I can help.

This story took my interest so I’ve decided to review it. Rain fell from the darkened sky as piercing drops. – The weather isn’t worth this. Rain usually falls from ...

it's easier to define abnoral and then normal. - Failure to Function Adequately - Deviation from ideal mental health - Deviation from social norms Anything that doesn't fit into these ...

I noticed it was part one of three, and usually people will review the first part, maybe less for the second and hardly any for the last, so I thought ...

Great name, but needs a lot of work. I'm here to help if I can. =] Low vibrations – How are they low? You spend a lot of word describing ...

You should try another story. Go back to the one that didn't make it a year later and you may just realise why it got rejected, and therefore how to ...

You are never more alive than the moment before you die. – Nice line. It would be good if you put this in an isolated paragraph of its own to ...

This is very well written. I’m here to give you an in-depth review but I’m not sure I’ll be able to find too much to help you on. I’ll warn ...

Thanks everyone. I'm finding my feet now

Hey, I've been searching for something to review and feel this could really improve from a few tweaks. I have to say though, this is my favourite story I have ...

I really do think this is brilliant, which is why I’ve spent time going through and giving you an in-depth review to make it even better. A great twist at ...