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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Irregular Painting

    Thank you so so much! :) Your review made my day! :)

    Aug 6, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Irregular Painting

    Yes, I made the picture and that is my signature....:) Making the protagonist ambiguous was deliberate, but I guess I should have mentioned that he was a guy. I had ...

    Jul 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Invisible

    Thanks for your insights! I'll try to cut down on the excess adjectives and flowery language...

    Jul 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Invisible

    Thank you so much for your thoughtful review....I know I have a huge problem with run-on sentences, so I'll try to improve that in the future. You're absolutely correct about ...

    Jul 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Forgotten (working title)

    Wow! This was nearly flawless! This was perfection! :) I can't wait for more! I'm a total fan! :) I can't even nitpick enough to make this a meaningful I'll ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Invisible

    Thank you!!! :) :) (I'm actually blushing) I'm so glad that I joined gave me the opportunity to meet so many wonderful writers like you :)

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Irregular Painting

    Thanks for reading and reviewing my work! :) Yeah, I have a personal issue with characters...I never like naming them...When I was younger I never even gave titles to my ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Exchange

    This was almost like a Philip K. Dick novel! I loved it! :)

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Irregular Painting

    Thank you so much for the wonderful review (again) :) :) I'm so happy that you liked my story :) I'll try my best to describe the characters more...a major ...

    Jul 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Invisible

    Thank you so so much...:) :)

    Jul 10, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Invisible

    Thank you so so much! You've made my day! Really...actually, you've made my entire week! :) Thank you so much for the encouragement and the wonderful review :)

    Jul 8, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Invisible

    Thank you so much! :) I'm so glad that you liked my story...and next time I'll try to write a longer piece...the problem I face is that unless I finish ...

    Jul 7, 2013
  • Art » Realistic, Other Re: Cherries

    Cool! :)

    Jul 6, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Invisible

    Thank you so much for your kind review :) And yeah, I do have a major problem with run-on sentences...I'll try to curb those tendencies the next time... And this ...

    Jul 6, 2013
  • Short Story » Culture, General Re: Dancing Eyes

    Hey! I really enjoyed this little vignette! The descriptions are subtle and interesting, and the story itself is powerful. And the ending is great too. I can't wait to read ...

    Jul 6, 2013


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