dreamsingray

I can see where you are coming from by this poem. I feel a few spots could use some reworking, but other than that a very good job indeed. I ...

Wow! This is a very amusing poem and manages to get its point across without being too, too harsh. What you really need is capitalization and better punctuation, but other ...

Hi so I really liked the poem and I agree that it is very well written for a first person poem. I'd like to point out a few small errors ...

I must say that I really enjoyed this. I know what you're saying and I can feel it in your words. Also, I can say that I know how it ...

I try and hide This pain inside My heart where no one sees; To keep my troubles Locked away Somewhere you wouldn't believe. Behind these big blue eyes, So happy, ...