dreamsingray

Sorry that I’m not perfect, Because we all know you are; All alone in your own special world, Where only the fantastic star. And I know how hard it must ...

Hello there! I have a couple little nitpicks here for you. Life is a miracle. But its also shit. You can try hard as hell to be and do your ...

Hello there! I have just a little nitpick for you I hate going down the street and seeing an abandoned animals just sitting there shaking with fear That should either ...

This just sort of came to me not too long ago and I wrote out another version as a short story, which I'll post later. In the meantime, any critiques, ...

Hello there! Just two quick little things. First, as the reviewer before me said "ain't" isn't a word. I feel that "isn't" might be a better word. Second, the flow ...

Hello, I have just a few quick nitpicks. It's me Who like a burglar Leaves your house Covered in The velvety softness Of an early morning And the lingering smell ...

If I told you today, exactly how I felt, Could you dare to say the same back? Could you hold me, forever, under the stars, Just as I’ve always wanted? ...

Wow. This is a very strongly worded poem. I have a couple corrections though: You can be such a bitch And you know it You don't really give a shit ...

Fine for a minute, Pushed down again. Slightly better for an hour, Knocked back again. Happy for a day, And slammed to the floor. But to just be myself, I ...

Hi! All I have to say is what a beautiful poem. I thought that it flowed nicely and they rhymes were pretty good. Thanks for explaining him getting cut off ...

My friend wrote this and asked me to post it so, here it is. I was looking for a friend and not just anyone would do, When my eyes stopped ...

I'm not sure if this is any good yet so please comment and let me know. I appreciate all criticism. Thank you! I don’t want to hide. It hurts my ...

Hi! So I really enjoyed the poem and what it's communicating. However, I can't interpret if your use of "lite" instead of "light" is intentional? If so, why is it ...

Hi, so I really liked the poem, only problem for me was the spelling errors and the flow of the rhyme was a little off. Spin spin the potters hand ...

I must agree that the repetition is well done. The one thing that didn't work for me was the stanza- Slight smiles Hide the read reason. Yet they give off ...