dreamintechnicolour

Beautiful, beautiful work.I really can't see anything that requires editing. An absolutely perfect piece!! Amazing imagery, chilling description. I wasn't even consciously reading it, it just seemed t

I like it. I think the last lines are nice how they tie it all together, not out of place at all...But i'm not really an expert on poetry... And ...

In spite of myself, I actually quite like this.. Just a couple of fix ups: When my mom says a few more hours (which she already said hours ago) she ...

Love it! The only constructive things I accumulated to say have already been said...Hmm.. I guess all I'd say is It was worth it to be skinny if it meant ...

Ah, I absolutely love it! :D Just a couple of minor word things; But I can’t help but pity If it was me I would write "Now I can’t help ...

I really enjoyed this. It's nice to take a break from the tense, high action plots which everyone seems to think equates to "good writing". Only minor errors (mostly just ...

I really enjoyed this, right from the start I felt like I was in the room with Mr Thimble. the imagery was sharp and focussed, which made it easy to ...