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Jump out a window. Hope I get a bottom floor one!!! Would you rather lick a public toilet or spend the whole day in the middle of a city naked?

Ugly duckling! At the end of the story he turns into a swan!!! Would you rather date your best friend's parent or your high-school math teacher?

People should take 'fat' people as they are, and if the 'fat' people go as far to starve themselves, then they are just as bad as those superficial popstars. Just ...

Banned for not being secure enough in your feminity to kiss a tiara...

The answer to your question is "What does x^2+3x+2 equal when x=5?" What year was the franco-prussian war?

Wow, this is sheer brilliance. Your writing makes my day. I can't fault it, although I much prefer the revised version of this piece; I like that it's slight;y longer ...

I would very much appreciate your highly regarded thoughts on my newest piece. Name: 16 Days in the land of broken dreams Genre: Other Poetry Link: Thank you in advance ...

1. Contained in a sphere of darkness, unrelenting. Fear closing in from all directions. 2. Alone, none to save you. Captive, like a fish in a tank, resigned to the ...

I quite like this. Very nice. However; the lack of punctuation and excessive spacing, in my opinion, made it quite hard to read. I tried to put the correct punctuation ...

I don't think that I would describe it as rage, I'm not angry, just annoyed. I guess this peice works better if you know me, I'm not usually one who ...

I really like this. Very thought provoking. Only things I would change: these lines Would you tell me that you love me? Would you pretend to be above me? I ...

Beautiful, beautiful work. I love how you're not afraid to takle the tougher questions in life. You are the true master of the rhetorical question. I am moved almost to ...

One Bazillion, Seven Hundred And Eighty Three Squillion ,Nine Hundred And Fifty Six Pillion ,One Hundred And Seventy Eight Rebillion, Three Hundred And Sixty Nine Vigintillion, Five Hundred And Thirty

Certain Someone was a great motivator to get me back on the writing wagon, he has that much going for him at least. I seriously thin kyou deserve a cookie ...

Oh my, I really love this. It's so real and absolutely gorgeous. The whole way through I kept going "awww" out loud, got some funny looks but it was completely ...