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I'd love it if you could give me your thoughts/corrections on Paradise Lost? Thank you so much!! ~Techni

Like a glass ball, If held With too much, Or too little Attention, It shatters; Leaving only Ruins. She watches as it falls, Tumbling Down, To crack, To fragment, To ...

I really liked this, nothing to critique really. I loved the Styrofoam line (just like everyone else, I know...). Only problem is, that Starbucks don't use Styrofoam cups and they ...

This was great! I laughed constantly in that kind of laughter where you know there'll be something funny coming up so you may as well not stop. Epic craftsmanship my ...

Thanks!!!

Ok, so I have to write a report of a short story under the theme of 'the search for truth'. I have been looking at Edgar Allan Poe works but ...

Oh my, that is just beautiful. I honestly have nothing that I would change, remove or add. I know this is a very unhelpfull review but I just wanted to ...

I liked what I read of this. But it really was too long for the Internet. I think if you broke it up into parts just for the critiques then ...

Wow, i really liked this. It was entertaining and amusing and didn't lose my attention. The dialogue and action was great. I loved that Tom and death seemed like just ...

It never bothers me when this sort of thing comes up unless it is mechanical or cliche. I think you have to ask yourself, is it really pulling its own ...

Ok, at the risk of being shot by all the people who think it is the greatest literary work since sliced bread... To Kill A Mockingbird is the absolute worst ...

Thanks so much for your help guys! That website is especially helpful. I can't really be more specific, I got a review on This Piece which said that the names ...

I only name some ipod's name is 'Ipodulous'

How, oh how, do you stop your character's names from sounding cliche? I generally don't give my characters names unless I absolutuely have to, to avoid the reader getting negative ...

The sun shines through the bathroom window, casting four mottled rectangles of light across the floor. With her back against the closed door, Sally Sutherland lines up groups of white ...