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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Survival Rebooted Chapter 1

    Thank you SO much! Your review was a ton of help and it really helped me grow as a writer!

    Jun 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Henry The Unknown

    May 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Survival (Rebooted) Arc 1

    Update: changed story to third person

    May 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Survival (Rebooted) Arc 1

    Thank you very much!

    May 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Survival (Rebooted) Arc 1

    I got a bunch of reviews talking about the tense change, so I fixed it up to third person! If you have the time, could you reread it and see ...

    May 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: I am a Poet

    I like the simplicity, but I think this would be more interesting if you stretched it out a bit. I'd focus on the painter part, that could be stretched out ...

    May 10, 2017


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien