draolatch

Thank you SO much! Your review was a ton of help and it really helped me grow as a writer!

Update: changed story to third person

Thank you very much!

I got a bunch of reviews talking about the tense change, so I fixed it up to third person! If you have the time, could you reread it and see ...

I like the simplicity, but I think this would be more interesting if you stretched it out a bit. I'd focus on the painter part, that could be stretched out ...