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Re: Survival Rebooted Chapter 1
Thank you SO much! Your review was a ton of help and it really helped me grow as a writer!
Jun 18, 2017 - Re: Henry The Unknown May 10, 2017
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Re: Survival (Rebooted) Arc 1
Update: changed story to third person
May 10, 2017 -
Re: Survival (Rebooted) Arc 1
Thank you very much!
May 10, 2017 -
Re: Survival (Rebooted) Arc 1
I got a bunch of reviews talking about the tense change, so I fixed it up to third person! If you have the time, could you reread it and see ...
May 10, 2017 -
Re: I am a Poet
I like the simplicity, but I think this would be more interesting if you stretched it out a bit. I'd focus on the painter part, that could be stretched out ...
May 10, 2017
