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Re: Breathing
i loved it! omg! it was soo sad! i seriosly almost cried *siffle* ha ha robert seemed like the guy that i imagine as my love too. EVEN IF HE ...
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Re: ii
im sorry jeesh it was actually ment for a friend of mine she had a boyfriend who he dumped her so she kinda cut herself i wrote these lyrics for ...
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Re: Real-Life Young Love
i enjoyed this poem just as it is... :D i personally think that the rhyming was perfect because i luv wen poems rhyme it makes it make more sense to ...
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Re: Child
actualy a pretty good poem! =] but i have no clue what the whole idea was bout? and also i thought you cud have writtin a teeny bit more to ...
Jan 5, 2007 -
Re: ii
ii
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Re: Changes
thanks u guys! :D this helps me lots! :D
Jan 5, 2007 -
Re: she cared when no one else did.....
thank you!! a lot!! :D i'll make sure to write more stories. thats a given.
Jan 5, 2007 -
Re: The Poem...I don't know
omg! i luved it it makes toal sense! :D and it rhymes i luvv rhyming poems :D
Jan 5, 2007 -
Re: Changes
When I was five I used to see Boys as disgusting as dead birds And the also had cooties Then when I turned eight I started to realize Those boys ...
Jan 5, 2007 -
Re: she cared when no one else did.....
thanx! sorryn its kinda my first time1 i hope to get better and ill use these tips! =]
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Re: Afraid of the Dark
great song but i agree with the other guy u shud put in more lyrics
Jan 4, 2007 -
Re: she cared when no one else did.....
"Why is this happening to me?" Kara asked herself while she was walking home on that cold wintery day. She tried to hold back her tears as she watched her ...
Jan 4, 2007
