drama_queen

HI there! I'm pretty new to this site and I've been looking at some of the scripts, and I really love yours! I like acting, and if I were given ...

I liked it, but it was very short and fast. I'd like to see some more dialogue between the characters. You should slow it down, and of course add more. ...

That was really awesome! I love acting, and I'd absolutely love to perform that one day. It was really funny, but there were quite some powerful bits mixed in. I ...

I don't really have any experience with this sort of thing, but why not have a prologue where you describe the world, and then introduce your characters and story in ...

That was really funny! I loved it. As others have said, it's extremely thought-provoking. Serial Killer Bunnies... morbid yet effective. I will be wary when I next meet a rabbit. ...

Nup! Soccer for you is soccer for me. Football, or AFL (Australian Football League) is this other sport where a bunch of mad guys run around with a ball and ...

I'm definitely going to post my story here later, because I'd really like people to help me make it better, and I'd be totally honoured if you read it. What ...

Hi there! You're my second review, so this probably won't be very helpful, but I'll try my best. ever loving time I don't understand this bit. Maybe you should add ...

Dairy Queen is about this girl who lives on this Dairy farm in America, in a town where sport, particularly football, is everything. She has to train the QB from ...

Thanks for the welcome! The story is based on Dairy Queen by Catherine Gilbert Murdoch. It's not really a fanfic, I just took elements (mainly sport, which really isn't my ...

This is my first review, so I'm sorry if I'm no help. The beginning seemed to move really quickly. Like others have said before me, the girl only meets with ...

Hi everyone! I just joined this site and it looks pretty cool, from the tiny bit I've seen. I'm not much of a writer, but I love reading and just ...