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Re: Chapter One- Untitled
emmylou1995 i have seen a lot of works that ave surprised me on how good they are and how they are organized and i have to say I'm very surprised ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: untitled- this piece needs critique! very badly!
Hi the names dragons and i will be your critique for the afternoon first i think you should separate all the dialogue so that each new statement is a new ...
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: the elementals (title curtosy of rocksmith)
I added the introduction because that's how the beginning of my book is right now. Unfortunately I have writers block so enjoy what i have so far. Partial character introductions ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: temporary title=the elementals
I added the introduction because that's how the beginning of my book is right now. Unfortunately I have writers block so enjoy what i have so far. Partial character introductions ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: The Dragon.
you have to continue the story. please! I'm dying to know how they meet again. I'm so excited I'm bouncing in my seat excited for part 2 for me to ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: The Death of Xavier's Heart
oh my god you have to send me the rest of that story the beginning oh my god that was so good and sad i cried wiping away tears -dragons
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Yello! : )
hi i had a question what kind of book are you writing if it is even a book or is it a poem sorry i am starting to ramble i ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: the elementals (title curtosy of rocksmith)
I added the introduction because that's how the beginning of my book is right now. Unfortunately I have writers block so enjoy what i have so far. Partial character introductions ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: The Dragon.
oh my god that is an awesome story i got to say i think i can help you if you need it though because im obsessed with dragons as well ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Kidnapped
its great id love to do your reviewing for you and be your editor so if you would send me your drafts before you post them so i can look ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: Romance scene.
oh my gosh that is so good in fact you just loosened my writers block thank you soo much i was starting to think my writing career was over and ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: Let me go
i love your poem your dad and my dad would get along perfectly he says tht if he lets me go anywhere hes afraid ill run away from him so ...
Jun 12, 2010
