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Re: temporary title=the elementals
Thank you Penguin i appreciate that :DDDD
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Hello and welcome to one of the best websites ever!!!
Hello new people's! as you can already tell my grammer's not that great but there are lots people on here who are great at it everyone here has a talent ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Anger and Mermaid
OH MY GOSHERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THESE ARE AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: a girl's sadness eased
"Roses... Flowers for love..." The girl said as she looked at the rose, a single long stemmed rose; its head a deep black, barely any red visible. 4:28 P.M. She ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Screams of Tortured Hope
welcome to the forum world and unfortunetly i have nothing to give except for my advice ............................. ....................... ................. ............ ......... ....... ..... ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: To all my best friends on YWS.
This is awesome, nice play on words by the way, i feel loved hahahaha
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: operation: survive summer vacation!!!!
Hi! Regan here! I'm going to review your post. I put things that are wrong in red, there corrections in green, things i like in blue and punctuation/words that should ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: operation: survive summer vacation!!!!
prologue Clarese O'Neil awoke with a start to wind howling through her room throwing her old fashioned shudders against the walls on either side. The downpour left water droplets on ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Dragon Series : Book One : Prologue
This piece is a well, masterpiece in my eyes my only suggestion is that one, you make a new paragraph each time someone new talks and two keep writing i ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: Silver Moon
Keep goin, Chica I'll be checking in on your progress :)
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: Acomia- Land of Dragon Trainers
i love dragons as i have researched them for four years and am still doing so today and in my personal opinion this is a wonderful personification of them well ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: The Lie of a Normal Life
you made me cry, that is awesomely put in the way that it is oh so true! in a way beautiful, yet oh so hard to put into words. these ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Prologue and Chapter One, No title
oh my gosh they should totally make a love on YWS thing that you can click that is the best story i have ever heard to tell you the truth ...
Sep 11, 2010 -
Re: Prologue,1, School of the Dragons
Prologue " so close! " I thought to myself now letting my surroundings sink in, I was cornered in an alley way by a gang known only by who was ...
Aug 31, 2010 -
Re: The City of Elementals, Chapter 1
this story is a perfect blend of hook peaking interest and a girls fighting spirit i love it and would love to find out when the second chapter come out ...
Aug 25, 2010
