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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: As Dawn Comes To An End

    I enjoyed it. But some lines didn't flow together very smoothly. You should lengthen them out, add new words. But good job! Dragon Rider

    Sep 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: As We Are Now

    Excellent. I enjoyed it. I don't really have any mistakes to point out. I really liked it. Keep on writing! Dragon Rider

    Sep 22, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The chair lesson

    Thanks. I'll keep that in mind.

    Sep 21, 2011


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