dragonight9

I'm about to post Chapter 7 and can't wait to hear your thoughts on it. You've been a great critic and have a good balance of positive and negative comments, ...

I wanted Bellum to basically see Aurora as a way to pressure Shadow here. (he knows how Shadow feels about her) When it is revealed later on who he truly ...

Thanks for another great review. I may explain more about what is going on in the arena soon, but as for resisting the poison; in the first chapter of this ...

When I finish this last section of the book, I plan to go back and shift things around so everything fits. So I can totally look into this more at ...

Ah, I see. I find that using a - at the end of a word (for example, afte- ) can help make that clear. or using ... I mostly use ...

This chapter was really fun to write so I'm glad you enjoyed. (about the horns, a picture of Shadow is on the front cover of the story and he was ...

Thanks so much for your thoughtful comments. When I went back to adjust a few things you mentioned I realized some of the italics were missing on the Thoughts, so ...

Thanks for letting me know. I'll ask one of the site dev's to see if they can fix it.

I also just checked the chapter order in Wing 5 and it looks correct on my end. If I see any more comments about this issue I'll ask the mods ...

Hi, Thanks for all your comments. A few quick things in response: Regarding having a summery about the events up until now, I may do something like that at the ...

Thanks so much for your review! Shadow's Rising is all one book (with six parts/wings) and it's on my profile if you want to read it. Context is definitely hard ...

I pray the love and peace of Jesus surrounds and overshadows you. His love has pulled me out of depression before and I know it will bring light and life ...

Thanks so much for the reviews Archie! I'm replying to your last few reviews here. These short comments are great to show what kinds of things readers notice. I'm glad ...

So glad to see you're still enjoying. I posted my thoughts on the other review. Have a great week.

Thanks for the offer. I may look more into this kind of thing once my book is finished and I've got a stable job and such, but for now I'll ...