dragonight9

So glad to hear. I was worried this chapter might seem a bit info dumpy. I was so excited to finally reveal the powers of the mind gems too! I ...

I'm so excited to post the next three chapters. And looking ahead I have a lot more content than I was expecting. I may be able to get up to ...

Thanks, This was exactly what I was hoping for. I may go back and add a scene where Jarid actually gets close to being expelled. Perhaps during the scene with ...

I wanted to ask if you still felt that Jarid was threatened by the potential of him being expelled from the school. I worried that I overused this threat since ...

I always wanted to put in a 'wise teacher' moment but was worried that I wasn't wise enough myself to come up with one. So glad this worked out the ...

I am so glad you're enjoying! I'm sure you can relate to how awesome it feels to see readers connecting the dots and getting invested in your characters. Thanks so ...

I was honestly so excited to hear your thoughts on this chapter. I don't know why I enjoy showing the depths of human depravity but I tried to keep the ...

So awesome to hear your thoughts on how the story is progressing, and thanks for the pointing out those grammar errors. I'm almost finished editing the next few chapters. After ...

So glad to hear from you again Raven. As always, a great review! I actually rewrote that line you mentioned at least four times trying to make it sound right, ...

Thanks so much for the spelling corrections. Honestly this is making me so excited I can't help but start editing Wing 3. I can't wait to share what happens next!

Wow! You found this quick haha. So glad you enjoyed. I continue to be impressed by your insight. I totally agree that blending the magic into the fighting has been ...

I am so excited to share more. The comment about straw was great! I learned something new today which will only make my story more authentic. Also, I won't speak ...

Thanks, I already have a test post for practice but I am very grateful for the offer.

Guess I'll have to shorten a few of those.

This is more a comment than a review. I just wanted to say I'm very interested to read more. Not sure if it was the title picture or the stats, ...