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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 27
Hi! Dragon here to give my thoughts on this amazing story. That upon which my dragon's eye fixed I enjoyed the brief sparing match at the start but was surprised ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 26
Hi! Dragon here to review another chapter of this amazing story. That upon which my dragon's eye fixed The way you reiterated the contrast of the setting with the orcs ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 25
That upon which my dragon's eye fixed I love how you showed the mending/growing relationship between Kita and Stud. Before he could pitch a fit, someone knocked on the door. ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 24
That upon which my dragon's eye fixed It's hard to find a specific thing to comment on in the first section. I really enjoyed your description of the setting and ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 23
Dragonight is back for another chapter of this amazing book! That upon which my dragon's eye fixed From the sudden outburst, Leiytning barely restrained himself from unsheathing a weapon. I ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 22
I'm still working on my reviewing format but I hope you enjoy! That upon which my dragon's eye fixed I really love the setting you set up and the tinge ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 21
Hi Raven, here for another review using my new method. What my Dragon eye fixed on That entrance by Leiytning was perfect. It showed both his power and awareness of ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 20
Hi Raven, I've got some more time to dive into your wonderful story, and I think I've figured out the coding this time. I guess we'll see. That upon which ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 19
Hi Raven, I'm trying out some reviewing codes I've found along with a new format. I'll probably improve/change this in the future but we'll see how it turns out. [wordart=red+black]That ...
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Re: Not One Message On Your Phone
This was a very interesting tale and I liked the comparison of book and phone. The weather is a feeling and you used your other descriptors well. I'm not very ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 18
Hi Raven, So excited to read more of your amazing story. As I'm reading through: I like how you always (or almost always) start with a description of the environment. ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race: The Hidden Truth - Chapter 17
Hi Raven! So excited to see what happens next. Here we go! As I'm reading through: I like how you introduced the characters for this chapter. Their arguing is a ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 16
Hi again Raven, So excited to see what happens next. Let's get right into it. As I'm reading through: Your description of the cavern really set the mood for the ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 15
Hi Raven! Been a while but I finally found time to read more of your amazing story. As I'm reading through: I love the idea that Kodin made a shack ...
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Re: "Candy" (Based on True Events) - Author's Note, Prologue, and Part One
Hi aaliyah, I like to review as I go then do an overview. I tend to be a bit nit picky when it comes to spelling mistakes so if you ...
Feb 10, 2024
