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Thanks! Yeah, I'm a huge mythology nerd and I feel like there's so much of it that doesn't get used enough or receive enough attention, so I'm trying to fix ...

The arrows thing, I was trying to say that the reason she brought the arrows was because it was pointless to bring just the Bow. I didn't capitalize arrows because ...

Thanks! I hope you like them. I've been hearing good things about the earlier chapters as well :)

Thanks! These characters are super fun to write. The goats will be explained later on ;) The capitalization is for the symbols of a god's office. It's something I'll probably ...

Thanks! Lol, yes, Malia always tests how far she can push the line between humorous coyness and twatty nuisance, and she's not afraid to go over. XD Charax himself is ...

Thanks! Yeah, her hair is a bunch of snakes (that's part of her gorgon deal). They're just kind of there, although I do have to keep in mind they are ...

Thanks! Charax and Malia are a really fun duo to write. Clean up, as always, will be put in a nice little bag for future Dragon to clean up XD

Thanks! Catching up on reviews so here we go Ooh, I hadn't thought about cinematography for this, but it would be fun. Malia has her ways ;) Seppo clanks. A ...

Thanks! One thing that's banging around in the back of my mind is novel chapter transitions. Here, each part is just a discrete chunk, but when I publish it in ...

As always, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! On the plant life and gorgon fighting, what I was going for was how they could use the trees to ambush warriors ...

The images you're thinking of are optical illusions known as "ambiguous bi-stable two-dimensional forms. But optical illusion is the common term. And Charax mistaking the Pegasus for Malia is a ...

Thanks! I'm really satisfied with how the various character voices have turned out. It's made writing the story really enjoyable. More information about Charax and what's happening shall be forthcomin

Haha, I'm glad you like the story so much. I've really enjoyed writing it. At this point, I don't plan to switch POVs. Charax is moving towards something, and I ...

Ooh, the sinking aspect wasn't something I'd considered, although maybe that could be applied to something coming up... ;) The way I'm picturing it is he's "recovering" his lost powers ...

Nebesa is kind of like an alternate Olympus. I could probably make that a little clearer (added to the revision list). The specific fruits in the juice were quite literally ...