dragonfphoenix

Another thing that might help would be formatting. Not sure which country you're in, but quotes are typically done in "" instead of '', which is used for thoughts (if ...

I reposted this in single chapter segments, so people may not understand what you're referencing in some parts unless they keep reading. But thanks for the review!

Sure, if you want to. First chapter of my newest work also currently featured in the literary spotlight, "When I Cry". There's two chapters up right now, but I'm going ...

I was referring to those who say that the Ozone hole is growing, which would make the ozone layer be 'thinning', another thin reference. But yeah I get the difference. ...

Okay, I'll keep my curiosity in the eco-friendly cloth bag [save the trees!] and just sit back and wait for further explanation. But the MC not knowing their name, the ...

I don't have a firm handle on the whole Mary Sue concept yet, but there's a great Mary Sue Litmus test that you could use if you're concerned about that. ...