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Knight Dragon, here to review! My first thought when I saw your author's note: Seriously, though, it's okay. :D All right, on to the review. „Hush“, I calmed the I'm ...

Hiya! Hey, quick question: have you heard of Pottermore ? It's the official Harry Potter site, with a real Sorting Hat quiz developed with J.K. Rowling herself! Might be something ...

No prob! Glad to help. :)

Mmkay. Ah, the pendulum effect. "You're not doing enough." Okay! Time to overcompensate! XD Ooh, so they're your addiction, instead of commas. Well, that's good, in a way. It's a ...

Haha, okay. Yeah, revisions make things nice. :D

Oh how I know that feeling. XD And that's got to be one of my favorite anti-grammar explanations. I think Orwell's dumbing down of language idea is really chilling, though, ...

Mmkay. Just wanted to point that out. The spelling side of me gets hackles raised whenever I see alright. It just won't ever be all right for me. XD (And ...

Seeing the bright side doesn't mean turning a blind eye to the dark side. There's a balance. If you want to talk about it, just PM me and/or we can ...

Vocabulary and word choices are what will give you that feel, not lack of contractions. Tolkien is my prime example there. At the very least, please let your characters have ...

Just PM me if you need help with that. :)

Haha, no problem. It's completely understandable. :)

*I have no idea why that just did that. All the "%201D" is supposed to be a close-quotes. XD

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it. Actually, I did close it. He says a lot more than two lines. It ends here: The makers made their windmill?%u201D ...

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked the poem. Yep, that's pretty much the theme. Thanks again!