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Thanks for the review! With the first sentence, a bit of context from the previous chapters might help. The destroyed guy is the Weeping Queen's husband. She knows what happened ...

With the djinn's deteriorating, that's a callback to Charax making him swear an oath limiting how much he'd drain from Hasda to fuel himself. He's been so restricted that he ...

Hasda has been with the djinn a long time, and they've had plenty of conversations with each other. It's not really spelled out what, but Hasda has a better idea ...

Quick catchup: Malia's still got her feathers ruffled from the whole "I didn't kill the mortal who's no longer my champion" thing, she's *really* not used to it. And since ...

The three questions, Charax is continuing the conversation, and Malia is asking why he isn't upset (ie "that's your reaction?"), so Charax is asking why he should be upset. The ...

Thrax was Malia's champion from while Charax was retired. Usually, gods only have one champion, and Malia has a history of offing her champions when they're no longer useful or ...

Lol thanks. That was my "shoot, I already used 'shatter'" solution XD

Thanks! Yeah, the next few parts are certainly something lol. I've been looking forward to getting to them for a while now. With Marudak, he's a titan, so a tier ...

Glad to see you back! Haha, yeah, there's a lot going on. Some things get cleared up soon-ish, but others are gonna take a bit to get to. Thanks! The ...

No worries, glad you're back. Yep, we're definitely shaping up for something massive lol. Idk when but very soon

Thanks! Yeah, I try not to reuse titles but it's bound to happen at some point. I think I had another repeat before this one but I forget which. When ...

Thanks! I had a lot of fun researching stuff for the creatures. Next chapter should be interesting as well :) >.> The title was a copy paste glitch. Thanks. It's ...

Yeah, I think I settled on Tingid as the place and Tingin as the people/language/etc but I keep swapping it for the people and that one slipped through >.< I'm ...

Thanks! :) On its own, I can see how that sentence looks like a contradiction. They've already brushed up against Tamiyat once or twice by this point. While she's confined ...

Lazuli has always been a bit deranged and a bit single-minded in her approach lol. So the clunky was a bit Lazuli being Lazuli and a part "how can I ...