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Knight Dragon, here to bestow another Review Day review! Technical: If just to make you smile again like that, then yes.” His father said with a proud smile. “Son, I ...

Knight Dragon, here to bestow another Review Day review! Well, I have to give the reference paragraph, and then I'll review. “That I forgot to sign the lease papers and ...

Knight Dragon, here to give another Review Day review! Well, that was a really interesting poem. Sorry I don't have any technical advice to give, so I'll just review the ...

Knight Dragon, here to bestow another Review Day review! Well, I liked the broad vocabulary you incorporated into this poem. It had style and flair, and great descriptions. But your ...

Knight Dragon, here to bestow a Review Day review upon you! Oh my word. The moment I saw the format, I was seriously bouncing up and down. You did a ...

First review of my first Review Day ever! Congratulations! Knight Dragon, here to review! Technical: "It was pretty low, he thought, to be cast so little mind of his last ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! Technical: "At first she had simply felt blank. She felt almost like she was unrelated, the Naomi was a stranger.", shouldn't "the Naomi" be "that ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! (No, it's not quite review day, but I'm following this series and I'm not losing a Green Room review to Review Day chaos). Technical: "She ...

Knight Dragon, here to review, take two! Technical: "I don???t want these things attacking anymore of our loyal peoples establishments.??? , the anymore should be any more. "Without an unbeaten ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! Technical: "when the lights from above, says heaven is here." I felt like the comma needs to go, and "says" should be "say" for subject ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! (PS-Are you a squire or Knight of the Green Room yet?) Technical: "When you're together by my side", that line just feels awkward. How can ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! So, this was pretty good, but it left me with one big question: what really happened? You say that she's the only one who knows ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! I didn't find any technical things to comment on, so I'll discuss the content. I liked how the description and such was, but I felt ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! "Inasmuch not new to us are suffering and droop." That line makes no sense at all. What does it mean? "Howl’s there every book and ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! Technical: "No one can stop, less of all yourself." should read "No one can stop it, least of all yourself." "You turn to alcohol, it ...