dodopinkya

looooooooove it it's very good for a first poem it really shows the difference between children and adults keep on the good work

[quote="hales13"]Dear, you should cover your arms, i don't understand these part it doesn't mach with rest [b] Honey, everyone has seen it all, [b]not sure what to say i like ...

Hiya! It's great considering that English isn't your first language. One thing I would STRONGLY recommend if you want to survive around here is to capitalize the beginnings of sentences ...

i like it. it's good

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