dianis97

Hey there! So I have to say I read the book and I totally loved it. I liked how you started by telling us how you started reading the book ...

Hi there! So I have to say it was kind of hard to understand, be careful because it can turn out to be boring. Also you have some punctuation mistakes ...

I have a question...have you read the twilight series?, I think so, it reminded me of Twilight a bit, especially since one of the characters name is Alec. I really ...

*cries* Beautiful! So beautiful!, I really enjoyed reading it!, good job! I have a thing for Felicity, and I could sense perfectly sense her anger and sadness. I have to ...

hey! that was a sweet story, but there are somethings to be fixed. I have a question, what's the name of the main character?. also, why does Matt finds her ...

...mmm...okay..well, I have to say the story was kind of pointless. I'm sorry, but, it was just....odd. I have to say Abby kind of annoyed me, which I guess was ...

hey!! well first of all hope your doing well. Now let's start. Now you must be wondering what was their destination? They were going to the temple of the celestial. ...

i liked it..but it wasn't the Bella and Edward of the book, especially Bella. it went a bit too fast, especially at the end, i also think you should be ...

hey! well, i have to say i liked it..but I just think it's kind of...sorry for this, but I think it's kind of boring. There isn't an actual problem, I ...

wow!! i loved it! at the beginning..when you explained what the story was about I thought it was a kind superman..hehe I know, silly. well, it was really good..I have ...

it was really good!! I really liked it! it kind of reminded me a little bit about Edward and Bella, the relationship between them, but, you did have a few ...

OMG!! amazing job!!..I really have nothing bad to say about was beautiful! loved it I really liked the rain, it made it more romantic, I wish this was in the ...

It was good, but I think the first part it's better. The hook this time isn't that good, also remember describing a little more your characters, I don't know anything ...

was very interesting!!...you have a really good hook...goos story, the only thing i don't like was that everyting happened really fast, and you didn't tell us much about your character ...

it was a really nice story, I really liked it, it just kept me on reading. You made a few mistakes tought Quote: You cant tell your best MALE friend ...