diamond_eyes

hey these r great! i love all of them, especially the crosses keep up the good work :wink:

I don't really like it myself but I have nothing better to do :? so I'm posting it..critiques are welcomed anyways. I am me By the way I act The ...

wow! that was really good!! its a great prologue but i think that before you start writing the story u should write more about Saase..just a suggestion...but other than that ...

hey it was really good! and like they said..cute! :wink: lol

hey!! its sooooooooooooo soooooooooooo sooooooooooo good! save that for english class too! 4+++ lol wow im speechless! keep up the good work :wink: :D

hey this was a really good poem :D but i prefer the first two stanzas as well

hey that was interesting... :wink: i wonder what it would sound like as a song..like what the rythm..

hey ur right, thx! :D

hey you seem like a cool guy....maybe we could talk sometime?

hey that was a really good story...u described the characters very well..and it didnt turn out like i thought, which made it even more interesting...wow i couldnt stop reading..the setting ...

hey that was a good poem :) and it was funny in a cute way -->lol does that make sense? :wink: good job!

hey this is really good :D i like how you used short sentences..and the poem speaks for itself good job! :wink:

i'm not too good at critiques... when i read it, i felt what you where expressing and i really like how you compared nature with love..funny how they're kind of ...

wow! this sounds like its going to be a great story :wink:

hey thx for the tips