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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Younger Vs Elder

    "Why did you come into my life? Is it just to leave me alone someday?" I paused for a moment, "Ok, I am asking you for the last time, do ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Penelope Grayson

    Hey there! It's really awesome. The character was impressive and you brought it very well.. The look and feel is really good. The colors that you have chosen was attractive. ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Scary cat photo

    Hi, As you said it was really scary.. Lol Hmm..I felt the photo was too whitish, it can be reduced little. The eyes and the blue shades were really good. ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Stanger

    Hey ! To be frank, that was really a cool work.. I would suggest you to draw it light and i could see only one eye :D As it's the ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Being Alone

    Hey there! It was really good. The way you have written was really amazing. I could imagine each and every sentence when I read it. Though it's a simple plot, ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Other Re: Fair but unfair

    It's a song. So nothing to get confused :) Anyways thanQ

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Other Re: Fair but unfair

    thank you for ur comments :)

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: YWS Secret Santa

    1.Favourite colours: Blue, Blue and blue :D 2.Favourite activities: Reading, Writing, playing guitar, singing, dancing, hanging out with friends, watching movies(especially i love Tarantino movies), d

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: YWS Secret Santa

    1.Favourite colours: Blue, Blue and blue :D 2.Favourite activities: Reading, Writing, playing guitar, singing, dancing, hanging out with friends, watching movies(especially i love Tarantino movies), d

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Other Re: Fair but unfair

    *white skin-u girl-u girl-u Girl-u heart-u black-u Eyes-u eyes-u meet-u meet-u My future dark* - the music player played. "Why this kolaveri kolaveri kolaveri di," I wore my t-shirt singing ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Smile, honey - you'll get sunshine.

    Hey! Its really a cute and innocent conversation :) I loved it. I did not understand the last sentence. Except that it was a really great work.. Keep writing :)

    Dec 2, 2011
  • Other Re: Fill-out form for access to Heaven.

    I really loved it :D I read this twice and still am laughing :D Especially this sentence made me laugh like a mad !!! ;) I like skiing over dead ...

    Dec 1, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Regrets

    Hey ! I really liked it. :) Your narration was pretty cool. Especially the first half was impressive then the second half.. It touched me. And anythin that touches our ...

    Nov 30, 2011
  • Other Re: Dialogue

    Hey there! I liked all your dialogues, especially the second one.. All your dialogues are like arguments between two. Your characters must be like a Tom and Jerry :D Anyways ...

    Nov 29, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Just Laugh it all Away

    Lol.. I really enjoyed each and every lines. Some lines are very impressive which made me read twice or even thrice. And atlast I laughed like anything.. Even I had ...

    Nov 29, 2011


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