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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: How You Get Famous

    My parents don't understand me and for that I feel bad for them. They shake their fists and stomp their feet, yelling up the stairs, like little unattractive gremlins, "Kevin, ...

    Oct 8, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse

    I read Twilight before all the hype and I don't know it was just... mediocre. It was exactly what I expected from a book about teenage vampires. And I'm a ...

    Oct 6, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Finders, Keepers

    I don't have much to say except that I really enjoyed this. Mrs. is such an interesting character but I would like if you explored her past and why she ...

    Oct 6, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: reversed rewind (standalone)

    I like the mysterious tone of the entire story, but you can add more description about the city and everything without detracting from that. The part about him being four ...

    Oct 6, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The End of the World

    Thanks so much! I thought of grabbing people all over the world but I was afraid it would be a little gimmicky. I'll go ahead and edit it. :)

    Oct 5, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The End of the World

    I wish I had time to expand on this or think of a better title. Also it's super short but it's a school night and my mother wants to cull ...

    Oct 5, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Child's play part 2

    Here I am, bitch. Maybe you should put Lilith's whole cutting paragraph somewhere else so she can stay mysterious. That entire passage from her perspective really stuck out with you ...

    Sep 1, 2009


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