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Abaara shuffled down the slimy, lichen covered corridor, pulling his black robes further along his back in an attempt to shroud his being from this godforsaken palace. Shoulders hunched, he ...

HI there! Dexterra here :) I really have no faults to this at all - bar a few grammar mistakes which were already picked up by others. This was a ...

He went into fetal position as he anticipated what he knew was coming, a wail of agony escaping his lips. Perhaps you could say, he slip off the chair and ...

Cute story :) Pumpkins sat about me on our old front porch. I picked at the peeling red paint on the steps as the cold breeze made goose bumps run ...

Hey :) Thanks for reviewing! Glad you like it! I enjoyed writing it, so far. You;re right, I did clog it up a bit with the adjectives - I'll take ...

Thank you for the reviews guys! I'll take everything you've said into account and resubmit soon.

So far, it's quite interesting. There's just a few mistakes, which I picked up, but so far from that it's pretty good in terms of grammar and such. “No! Go ...

Lorelai was running. Running as hard as her little feet would take her. Ducking through alleyways, her pace quickened as she felt the more comforting feel of hard dirt beneath ...

First off, great potential. Really interesting - I want moar!! Not many mistakes, just some small grammar and punctuation. "A tall, rugged man swallowed the last of the whisky in ...

Hi there :) This is my first review, so I hope I give you some helpful stuff to work with! First off, try not to start a story with a ...

Brionie nursed the cup of boiling tea in her cold hands. Sniffing, she threw the hair out of her eyes and made her way to the lounge room. A crack ...

I sit in the bottom of the shower And let the water clean me of your kisses. It’s been five months But I can’t get your scent off me. I ...