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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Untitle Short Story - Quick Read, 1,170 words

    When I read my story too I feel like it's a longer version of the back of the book, I guess I need to work on some different writing techniques ...

    Nov 18, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Howdy. I have a short story that I need help with!

    Thanks, I read the rules and that. First, I put my story in the fiction spot where you showed me, but just today I got a message from an experienced ...

    Nov 17, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Untitle Short Story - Quick Read, 1,170 words

    This is my first short story. I wrote it today. I'd like honest critiques and suggestions. I made all the spelling and grammatical corrections to my best ability. But, if ...

    Nov 17, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: My 1st short story!! :D The Road Less Traveled Part I

    This is a great story, also considering you're from Mexico. Or, I mean, that your second language is English, and that's cool. I'm mostly fluent in french but I could ...

    Nov 17, 2008
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: ww1 Short Story

    I liked it a lot, there were a few things I would've changed but other than that I think it's great. You had a good amount of detail, but not ...

    Nov 17, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Howdy. I have a short story that I need help with!

    This is my first short story. I wrote it today. I'd like honest critiques and suggestions. I made all the spelling and grammatical corrections to my best ability. But, if ...

    Nov 17, 2008


When one is highly alert to language, then nearly everything begs to be a poem.
— James Tate