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Hey, thank you guys for commenting. I know it was a bit like a list, but it was really to show the comparison between the various type of music and ...

You are Music You’re as tender as a Love song Rebellious as Hip-hop Sweet as a Lullaby Insane as Rock Spiritual as Gospel Risqué like Dancehall Soulful as Jazz Upbeat ...

Hey, NYC I don't Know too much about songs/lyrics, but I know when I read your piece like poetry it was lovely. I liked it. I like the name too:firestarter. ...

Hey, treehugger and Jas, I am glad you both like it. To jas-- I will consider changing the word "warm" and I will surely revised " eyes rolled back". I ...

Hey, singerofthenight, I liked this! Love the imagery. Loved how you portrayed the violence of the storm, which symbolized the pain,with words. My favourite part-- "Gray clouds as far As ...

Hey, JessyAnnie, I'm des. I like your poem. It's deliberate and so is the pace. I think if punctuation was used then you'd get the right pauses in the right ...

Hey this is amazing! It's beautiful. The rays from the sun looks like a rainbowed pathhway. Nice backyard.

Tingle Warm heat from flames d o w n ward s p i r a l upon skin. Soft, earthy , heady sensation eyes rolled back no sound but the ...

Hi, dark, Niiice photo. I do agree with Demeter that it is a bit blurry and that it could've been larger. But I love it anyway! It looks like the ...

Hey,Jen I agree with Lena. The second drawing is amazing! I keep going back to it. The others are great but Whoa! that second one is almost perfect. The details ...

Hey, Icarlyfan, just quickly reviewing your excerpt. Great choice for the name, I like it. But should it be Assasins' Creed? Anyway, now there were alot of redundancy with your ...

Hey, Breezy, I'm Des. I loved this! I got this energetic feeling when I read it. My heart rate went up too! The flow was great. And I think you ...

Hey Bailecielo, Im Des. Hey I think this was superb. And I like the ending: Mirrror as a mirror mirrors . Kinda biting my tongue when I say it. :D ...

Dangerous Type He was in the throes of sleep. But then he heard a noise. He sprang up like a jack-in-the box, only he wasn’t in a box, but in ...

Hey this was indeed beautiful.