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First off, ill start with the finish :P I liked it, nice and abrubt and sinisterally thought out :D Ive skipped over your first chapter as I had seen that ...

heya, read a few of your chapters for this novel. Looks like it has potential. I think youve dragged out your characters imprisonment for a bit to long though, however, ...

I never nitpick, im sorry, I leave others to do that. I usually only comment if I like a story, and this is no exception. The post apocalyptic concept you ...

Santana, just like the first time I hate early mornings. I hate long days at uni. Ugh. I hate early morning car frost, A stark contrast to my girlfriends sleeping ...

What’s next? A new thought process ‘click’. A new window appears Thought visualised

A slightly immoral cynics Rapture This poem has a form. This form is called a Sestina. Basically I started with six words; end, cynic, faith, red, holy and crumble, and ...

I very much enjoy peoples various renditions of "the apocalypse" and this was no exception. Overall I thought it was written very well, for a short story atleast.. The main ...

This was a very good and intresting read. Put a good sci-fi spin on a almost war like story. I like the narrative you get into. Unfortunatly there is not ...

Sup bro. Was an alright story but lacked real originality. The ending is quite abrubt and leaves me with a feeling that there should be more. I like the idea ...

This was an awesome story! Very intresting idea and told brilliantly. Sometimes the ingredients going into the mixtures can get a bit tiring, perhaps you could try and squeeze some ...

Im not so sure about the battery one. Dont really like the cropping. Rain drop one is very cool. The goose is a good shot, however not centered, unless you ...

When you write it’s hard to realize; The reader’s not inside your head. They don’t know what you know. All they have is what they’ve read. It’s hard to make ...

Hey guys, first time posting on here. Would appreciate your thoughts on writing style and the overall feeling towards this piece. Threw it together pretty quickly. Thanks in advance :) ...