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Thank you everyone for your reviews, they were all very helpful. Rebz- Thank you very much. A broken heart is kind of what I am trying to convey, along with ...

Thank you for the comprehensive review, Wooster! I guess I have more changes to make than I thought! I can see how the wolves could come across, especially in the ...

Once again, very nice job, but a few more mistakes this time. While most Mercedario’s spend their time going out to the ill and the poor and the unjustly accused, ...

Glad you like it! Since this chapter's gotten some attention, I'll go ahead and post Chapter 3 and maybe 4. Thanks for the review! :D

No racism intended! :P And the MC actually finds out later that they aren't quite as barbaric as he once thought. There are 18 chapters, so I'd have to make ...

Thank you very much for your positive review and comments! Now that I read it over again, I can see what you mean by the "telling not showing." I suppose ...

Hmmm... An interesting start. It's not long enough yet to fully review, but it sounds intriguing so far. Is it going to be something along the lines of Inkheart, except ...