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  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General
    Re: Heal.

    WOW! That is a good start, I was disappointed that it had to end! I don't want to be critical, but I noticed an error. I was glad it wasn’t ...

    Jul 11, 2010

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: saturday night

    This was good! I like the characters, and how things went. I can't really find any error that was not previously mentioned. I wish I could help :smt001 ! Maybe ...

    Jul 9, 2010

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: A Waste

    WOW. This was an amazing read! It had good characters, and a good plot twist. I thought the woman was thinking about the man who was going to break up ...

    Jul 9, 2010

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: Memohirs of a brokenheart continued

    It's good! I just went to public school (don't ask), and it really catches the mood and train of thought is usually there! I only noticed a few grammar errors, ...

    Jul 9, 2010

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: Gypsy's Curse

    I enjoyed it too! And I know what you mean about the "turning into novels" bit. Whenever I try writing a story :smt024 , I go overboard with detail and ...

    Jul 9, 2010

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: Five Fingers of Fury

    A VERY GOOD READ! I think it is kind of in the style of Steven King's "The Shining," and I enjoyed that style except for the SCARE YOUR PANTS OFF ...

    Jul 8, 2010


Did you ever hear the Tragedy of Darth Plagueis the wise? I thought not. It's not a story the Jedi would tell you. It's a Sith legend. Darth Plagueis was a Dark Lord of the Sith, so powerful and so wise he could use the Force to influence the midichlorians to create life... He had such a knowledge of the dark side that he could even keep the ones he cared about from dying. The dark side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural. He became so powerful... the only thing he was afraid of was losing his power, which eventually, of course, he did. Unfortunately, he taught his apprentice everything he knew, then his apprentice killed him in his sleep. It's ironic he could save others from death, but not himself.
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