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I enjoyed this story quite a lot. There were a few mistakes, like keeping the word 'fun' out of a sentence. I also wish you had elaborated on the characters' ...

Well, there were only a few things I personally noticed. There were a couple of run-on sentences that you might want to use semicolons for. There were a few capitalization ...

I really enjoyed this piece. A couple of the metaphors, like the one involving the violins, were a bit... out of place. Also, in the sentence "And she pulled the ...

I started reading at two. I learned letters and stuff when I turned two, then was reading words by two and a quarter. The first picture book I read was ...