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To begin, the plot was very confusing. The names and who the main character was, was unclear and described unusually. Well, I like the plot, it's interesting. However, I feel ...

Hey.. So, in the story, I couldn't really tell but I think you wanted to write in past tense. You seemed to sometimes jump from past tense and then present ...

The story was slow, but still reminded me of when I was that naive. I'd say to double check your spellings and words, in the beginning you say "patients" but ...

Thanks guys for the input, I'll be sure to write more soon.

It was late and the darkness blinded me; I worked silently and quickly. The heap of crumpled blankets and curled pillows were aligned perfectly, I tugged the comforter over the ...