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Eden The military blockade against the virus kept me on the outskirts of the "Safe Zone." Therefore, I had to battle against these infected people on my own. My family ...

Cadence Cat, my new roommate, had arrived. I was relieved I wouldn't have to journey into the "Meet and Greet" by my lonesome but set back when I realized I'd ...

Cadence The plaid skirt rimmed with pink lace was nothing I imagined myself wearing this summer. Just the reflection of my pressed, knee length socks was causing shock. I do ...

Roosevelt's Charm School for Young Ladies and Gentlemen is a summer charm school program for youth aged 13-17. It is a month-long program at the Ellen Roosevelt facility in the ...

To Jenn: Thank you, I will be sure to read you’re works. To Addawen19: Thank you for you’re critique. I try to be a descriptive writer, so I may veer ...

So, you're story was acceptable. It did seem like the scene layout wasn't certain. In the first paragraph you say that it was cold that night then later it says ...

When my vision finally cleared and I met reality, confusion immediately struck. I was costumed in a fitted, hot red dress beaded at the bottom with black, devilish diamond-shaped beads. ...

This was not what I expected after reading the first sentence. But of course, your intro was perfect. The way the main character barely speaks, makes you want to continue ...

I actually read the whole thing..which is great! It kept me interested, wanting to know what happens. With a tragic car accident and someone who's uninterested in their year long ...

This seems like an interesting story. Like everyone else, is this your prologue or intro? My only suggestion is comma use. Make sure places you place them, need them. I ...

Your descriptiveness is beautiful. I truly appreciate finding young writers who can compose such amazing stories from bare nothing!

Well, at least you write too much! Sometimes I can't find enough words. The best thing about being that kind of writer is you can always reread your stories or ...

I like this story. At first, I was confused about the interaction of characters, trying to piece together and see whom said what. Unless you're going to mention Sasha later ...

Thank you for the advice, I appreciate it.. there's an intro to the story too, I'm not sure of the layout of this chapter yet. The intro is somewhat confusing, ...

Isaiah was an annoyance to me. For some reason he'd been in my English class Sophomore year and now, my Junior year, I imagined him stalking me. He was not ...