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  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: High Dive

    I wasn't second guessing myself, but for safe measure, I changed it to High Dive. Also, in a sense, I just told a paragraph, but broke it down like a ...

    Oct 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: High Dive

    Oh, no, I'm an actual poet. The title is a joke and has absolutely nothing to do with the poem. Thanks for the review!

    Oct 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Let's go drown!

    This was a way to "get back" because you clearly made fun of my writing style. However, considering that all of your "critiques" are completely wrong and I could tell ...

    Sep 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Let's go drown!

    Thanks so much Raye!

    Sep 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Let's go drown!

    Thanks for the review! The first review was making fun of me as a writer, rather than commenting on the poem, so it's all okay! Thanks!

    Sep 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Let's go drown!

    Also, dignity is a sense of pride in oneself, which was the point? So yeah. This was pointless and a way for you to "get back" at reviews I left ...

    Sep 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Let's go drown!

    Really pathetic review.

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: High Dive

    Strict.

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: High Dive

    You never wrote a review.

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: High Dive

    It's funny because I'm walking the cow to walk the cow. AHA

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: High Dive

    No, no, no. I'm walking the cow on purpose GOT YOU FOOLED THERE. Thanks.

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Satire Re: Lame, bored.

    Thanks a lot for the review! Yeah, the boldness is supposed to be casual. I don't quite know how to capitalize it as much as I could have.

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Satire Re: Lame, bored.

    I'm super lame, and bored.

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Dirty Knees, Cloudy Skies

    hypocrite

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, Film Re: Musical: The Play

    Hey Chhloe! Here to answer some questions. 1: There is one moral that I sticked with, and I don't see any morality depth in my story than the moral stated ...

    Sep 27, 2015


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