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Re: Balema, A world of many elements - Chapter 1 - The Story
Hi there Durrie! I would like to tell you a bit about what I, the reader, enjoys most. In a story, I like to get to know characters from the ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: Total Eclipse [Prologue]
Heya! I have an issue with the credibility. Would a man really be alive enough to read a note (upside down) that was stabbed into his chest before he fell ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: Diaries of a Teenage Vampire: Chapter One
From one amateur to another: Firstly, i totally relate to the feeling of protectiveness, accompanied by the feeling that your story is being attacked. But I learnt that if you ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: Untitled Story, Chapter One
Hi TNO! This little piece of what I feel is a much bigger story makes me definitely want to find out more. What is the background of each of the ...
Jan 26, 2010