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Hey there Finally that review I promised !! I hope it helps :D I liked the story, it was interesting, well done ! XxxDo

Thank you for your comment! I'm editing it right now. The new new version should be up soon ! :wink: XxxDo EDIT: Okay.. The new new version is up now ...

Hey !! Thanks for the comments! I'll get editing :D About the spelling... neighbours is the british way, neighbors the American. Seeing as I am neither (I'm Dutch) I've decided ...

Hey. Welcome again :D It is a good story, interesting concept, some parts are slightly confusing though. Why does he kill them, why take out the warriors and not just ...

Heeeeeeeeeeey ! I promised I would take a look at it, so here it is! Hope it helps! I really enjoyed the story :D Keep writing! XxxDo

Haha ! Thanks :D That last comment was funy ! Made me crack up :P Thanks for the comments guys! XxxDo

Thanks for the comments !! I'm glad you guys like it :D I'm going to edit it to add some detail regarding the father's possible death and try to make ...

OMG !! lol i write too much you critique too much :wink: what a pair ! XD THANK YOU so much !! Xxxx

LOL !! i know right ! XD all the stories on here except the Darkness Within were written after i joined XD before that moment i never actually wrote short ...

OMG JF !! THanks !!! :D you really do spend too much time on me LOL Xxx Do

:D thanks guys I'm currently working on the continuation !!

Haha :D to be very honest, I'm deciding whether to make her crazy or not in the continuation of the story, so it's not surprising that it's difficult to tell ...

I'm glad you guys like it !! Thanks for the comments!! Oh, and Gryphon, I'll PM! you when it continues :D XxxDo

Aw damn it! The QUOTE feature didn't work out and I have no clue how i messed it up ! Sorry XD XxxDo

Thanks for the comments!! LOL :D there's a major gender confusion in my story. Cal's a girl. Haha! It's meant to be a shortform for Calleigh ! I'm gonna try ...