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There is no stereotypical genius...some will argue that Shakespeare was the only true genius... However, it is a fact (I can't remember where I heard this) that the cleverer you ...

A prologue is not a first chapter. If you are hooking your readers in the prologue, chances are you just wrote your first chapter. A prologue is not a chance ...

You should not do a prologue unless you are dealing with a high fantasy or sci-fi epic novel. Simple as that. The only other uses for prologues are one of ...

Sci fi is what you make of it. Usually its easiest to get started in this work by doing fanfiction and then moving on to your own works. However if ...

A much better chapter, while still short it is getting interesting with Lights dreams that haunt him, something we never seen or heard about during the manga. Keep up the ...

Light is definitely smarter then you make him out to be. He knew immediately when L was first suspicious. L knew all along, but could not prove it. That was ...

I use 25-30 pages, but each chapter being composed of scenes. Chapters are often set by time, place or mood change. I will begin a fight at the start of ...

This research is highly suspect as it essentially replays the six day war in terms. If the USA or anyone else jumps in the entire middle east could easily disappear ...

Ah fixed it up. You'll see for that in the next bit in fact. Pencharmer is expecting it around her neck still...but they both think it broke. Pencharmer in his ...

Author's Note: Taking a hint from the others I decided to make the scenes longer, and with good reason for this one! This scene is humorous and is kind of ...

The second part was not read from the book, it was Constance's reply referring to Augustus Venaldi, the lead researcher into many unusual and magical events. You'll learn more about ...

Thanks for the help so far, the tenses I don't see any problem, but if he had an example that would help better. As for the periods and commas for ...

Author's note: The scene directly follows Scene 1. Yes there is a lack of character descriptions and it seems as if things are a bit complex. The very nature of ...

I do them, but same thing, collaboration doesn't work well. Also I am in the middle of a project to, lol. For researching how things would go, its best to ...

Sounds more like Pop lyrics, but the tone would definitely seem to be a bard's song. I don't know of many bands in pop, but the old style is definitely ...