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You used the scimitar on the goblins. :P Its your story, but I usually home in on what nature or style the writer uses even from the weapons they choose ...

Oh Tempest...I don't know if that was a side shot at people trying to help here, but Snoink's advice was solid, and I mean REALLY solid. If you broke down ...

Couple notes... why all the needless telling? Unless this is a narrative piece it is overly dramatic and written like an epic poem, but clearly doesn't follow typical form. A ...

You can say different, but they way it was handled was exactly like any generic super soldier, but I swear I just had to watch the trailer again, even the ...

Squallz hit upon the FFXIII trailer note... its like... word for word to action of the trailer. Most people cannot jump and spin in the air, let alone upside-down. That ...

Use the effects of the seasons, you could go with harvest or rainy season. Some people like to use specific flowers or blooming periods to give a hint at what ...

Please post it here in the first post and for the rest of them. It doesn't seem to be a large file for any of them. :/ For attachments they ...

Author's Note: I had to do a bit of tinkering with this one, but at last I like the scene to post it. More dialog driven then normal its a ...

Not to be picky, but can you please prepare a .odt (Free Openoffice document form). I have trouble importing docs into my generic Microsoft Word Processor (its not Word). The ...

Receiving no reply from Erik, Yuki sighed, "He's not there or is very very rude to not respond. It cannot be helped." Yuki accessed the CPU panel of her computer ...

Edit 4 times? No lol not this part. I added new stuff in cause Snoink found it wasn't going anywhere. The dress is semi-important as it shows class and how ...

I've never had a problem reaching 50 points, it doesn't seem that much. I probably get 50 just for this short little post alone. Mods can probably take action against ...

Author's note: [s]A good scene for importance, but the end of the scene just doesn't feel complete. I really don't know what to do with it, so I'm turning to ...

Yes it is better, still moving too quick. It takes much longer to write then it does to read, so always read it yourself with a fresh perspective. Much better. ...

Hope to break 1000 chapters of FEC in first draft format. Hope to edit the first 200 chapters of FEC. Re-rewrite Ragnarok