defiantAuthoress

Thank you! I totally see what you're saying, and I'll definitely work on my descriptions on the next revision of the story.

I think if you go to "Edit Work" to the right of the poem you can change it there?

Thank you very much!

Thank you, I totally get what you're saying! :)

Thank you very much! I agree that I should probably tweak the order. :)

Thank you very much!

Thank you so much for your input! About changing the last line to tie it in, specifically where you suggest "No, I think girls should just smell like", that's not ...

Thank you!

Thank you! That's exactly what I was trying to go for! I really enjoyed reading this review.

Thank you! It really does sound like a song now that I think about it. :)

Thank you! I really understand what you're saying here, and I really like your idea of cutting the lengthy repetitiveness. I think I'll do that. :) Thanks again!

Thank you so much! I totally understand what you're saying. I actually noticed that the characters are a bit flimsy myself, and that's something that I'm hoping to improve on ...

Thanks so much, my friend! That was exactly how I was hoping that it would come across.

Thank you so much! I really appreciate this.

Thank you! :) I really enjoyed this review. I think I'll give another try at writing in this world again soon.