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  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Perpetually Incriminating Uncertainty of Us

    I really like this poem. I feel like it's very emotional and you have a strong main point to it, but I feel like there are a lot of unnecessary ...

    Dec 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Mind Games

    Hey there! I really, really love the concept of this piece. The fact that these emotions became, well, sentient, was really interesting to me. I'm not sure exactly how you ...

    Dec 8, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Paper Girl

    I really love the concept of this poem! I've always been one for free-verse, and I think that you executed this very well. I feel like paper girl is shy ...

    Dec 4, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: depleted batteries with a famous celebrity

    Hey, I really like this! All of your metaphors are very vibrant and visceral, and I think it truly adds to what you're saying in this poem, about the glamour ...

    Dec 3, 2013


“If lightning is the anger of the gods, then the gods are concerned mostly about trees.”
— Lao Tzu