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Re: The Perpetually Incriminating Uncertainty of Us
I really like this poem. I feel like it's very emotional and you have a strong main point to it, but I feel like there are a lot of unnecessary ...
Dec 14, 2013 -
Re: Mind Games
Hey there! I really, really love the concept of this piece. The fact that these emotions became, well, sentient, was really interesting to me. I'm not sure exactly how you ...
Dec 8, 2013 -
Re: Paper Girl
I really love the concept of this poem! I've always been one for free-verse, and I think that you executed this very well. I feel like paper girl is shy ...
Dec 4, 2013 -
Re: depleted batteries with a famous celebrity
Hey, I really like this! All of your metaphors are very vibrant and visceral, and I think it truly adds to what you're saying in this poem, about the glamour ...
Dec 3, 2013