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Re: Leaves (drawing)
They are really well done, I don't have very much to say. One leaf in the bottom corner on the first drawing looks too dark and has too much. The ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Lonely?
Is this a review? I don't know but I hope so. 1)I think it has the really woderful contrasting brightness from the black to the red in the hair. 2) ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Sunset and Cows
The sun it beautiful, the way it steaks though the sky makes it seem out of this world. Unfortunately the sun was so bright and toke up most the space ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: Italy
The flowers were beautiful The way the flowers bright color contrasted with the cool green background. I think the flowers look a little out of focus though, ether that of ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: Self portraits
1) The fist picture looked posed, I personally think posed pictures look a little fake and cheesy. 2)In the second picture I really liked who you're looking away from the ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: New Mexico
I really like the pictures. The first picture I really liked, you captured the sunset wonderfully. With the sunset in the backround you can see the refelcetion in the water, ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: Jack and Jill Went UP the Hill
Personaly I thought the intorduction was very weak, and needs some work. You could also use alot more detail.
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: Bucking Beauty
i really liked the picture it is very detailed, it just seemed like the front legs are off, they are really deatial just it seems to look like the horse ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Never Alone in Heaven
i really liked the poem it a great way to think about death. Alot of people think that death a horrible thing, you saw the bright side
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Swallow Me Forever
i thought it was a graet poem i did find one mistake, when you wrote "When will you be with me love?" did you forget to pace a comma after ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Faith
that was a awsome poem, i really enjoyed the questioning. I'm not a rieligious person but, the ending was great and really proves faith
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Your last friend
hey i really liked the poem. I found no errors.
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Honor
Honor How would you define honor, Is it something you work for? Is it something you fight for? Is it something you dedicate you life for? What is honor? Honor ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: Failing
Never Again Never again I will be wrong, Never again I will fail, Never again I will lose, Never again will I try Never Failure I’m a failure, All alone, ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: Cerberus
this drawing is way better the anything i could of done but, a predator has a slimmer waist, after you draw the chest the stomach doesn't curve into the hind ...
Jan 1, 2009
