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Beautiful, the ryhming was good, i feel too much ryhming can get out of speachless!

Yea i agree with Kal and Alex, there isnt much conflict. He is just killing and killing and nothing else, if anything its a diary. But the idea is great, ...

It is a good story but i feel no connection with the characters. It's very bland and you dont explain anything. How did they loose the freighter? Many questions like ...